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Comments from luvsalik
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2015-06-09 23:42:03 | Lillian Bell 7: Daddy's Lap | I liked this part more than part 8. It really got my juices flowing, and the orgasm I had to have, whilst reading the part about her on Daddy's knee, was very wet if you know what I mean ! I definitely will be reading more, I hope you keep the series going. Thanks for the post, and the resulting outcum ! Luvs xx |
| 2015-06-09 21:13:06 | Lillian Bell 8: Incest Instigator - Part 1 | Good story, this is the first story of yours I read and I like your style, I enjoyed it a lot, I love interracial stories too, theres nothing sexier than seeing the two contrasting skin colours together, mmmm it looks amazing, its something ive always wanted to see first hand , but never have. My only criticism is simetimes you missed some punctuation , so things ran on and seemed strange, and needed rereading, which puts me off, there seemed to be a word missing after the word wanton in one place , but other than that , which are totally miniscule faults, it was perfect. I should have read the other parts first but I didn't feel like I'd missed out. Great story, thanks for the post. Luvs xx |
| 2015-08-02 12:17:36 | Weight loss Motivation | I don't like pain so that part if the story did nothing for me , that said the way you alluded to what more is to come and the obviously hidden eroticism did get the juices flowing. It was very well written, you have a very smooth style and the story flowed very well. There was only one point I didn't agree with and that was the "crocodile tears" I definitely think by that point they would be anything but crocodile tears . That is a very small point though and I thoroughly enjoyed the story and your writing. Thanks for the post and your efforts . I hope she does well though something tells me it won't be plain sailing ;) . Thanks again, Luvsalik xx |
| 2015-08-02 11:52:37 | C'mon Sis, Let;s Fuck | I really enjoyed your tale , thanks Don. I love incest stories , I think it's the forbidden element, I've never been attracted to any of my family but for some reason incest just does it for me. This did it for me, made me wet in all the right places, I loved the more fun and jokey edge you gave to your story. It was well written and easy to read , as well as being very believable. I have read lots of your work and you never disappoint . Thanks for your time and effort. Please keep it up. Take care . Luvs xx |
| 2015-06-18 11:28:03 | Grandpa's Milk | I enjoyed your post and for a first story it was fab. My only criticism is that it seemed a little formal, I think once you write more though that will improve. Keep up the good work. Thanks. Lal.xx |