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Comments from luvsalik
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2015-05-17 17:29:02 | Taken by my Brother | Hi Lacey, congratulations on such a fantastic story. I loved it, it was well written and had me wet and horny in no time flat, the build up and flow were perfect it had my breathing ragged and me right in that hot enclosed basement with the characters. There wee two tiny spelling mistakes which in its self is a triumph to be applauded. I haven't had much higher time to read much lately , and have only read one other of your stories but I will definitely try to make more time to complete your list, you writing is detailed and accomplished. Thanks for your time and hard work (even though you make it seem effortless ). Luvs.xx I have to agree with another comment that stories written by women tag does draw me , women do tend to build up more and they just seem to have little nuances that enrich a story, not always mind bbut in my opinion, and it must be there for a reason . There's no need to be mean, 2015: 05:15 00:43:30 |
| 2015-04-15 11:15:25 | My Daughter Caroline is an Exhibitionist…AND I LOVE IT…The Vacation is coming to an end (Part 3) | Not having so much of the exhibitionism , they keep their robes on mostly until they are alone, hopefully, now the story will really start. Thanks for the work. Luvsalik xx. |
| 2015-04-15 11:26:50 | Scoring a Football Player (Part 2) | Really enjoyed this one , the only criticism I have is that I wished you'd have gone into more detail about the sex, it seemed to be glossed over and rather rushed, please describe the sex more in the next part, because my critique apart, it is a well written enjoyable story, and it needs to continue, please. Thanks for the post, Luvsalik xx |
| 2015-04-15 11:47:41 | What Happens in the Woods Will Stay in the Woods…Or Else | I don't agree with the first point from the persons review underneath me, but some bits were sketchy, first you didn't say she sucked him, just it was her turn then you moved immediately to him saying he'd cum straight away and wouldn't last, to her cumming then they went home, no mention of him cumming then said each had the others taste in their mouths, but as I said there was no mention of her sucking him. While I enjoyed the premise , it felt rushed, I will read the other parts and hope that its much more descriptive and cohesive. Thanks for the post . Luvsalik xx |
| 2015-04-15 13:46:09 | What Happens in the woods will stay in the woods…or else – Part 3 – The Final Day_(1) | Your story had so much potential, but for me it missed the mark, sorry. You made errors, a name change, tim or scott, makayla was behind him then in front kissing then kissing his back, all seemingly without moving. You mentioned hiw much looser her pussy was but you never even mentioned they had proper intercourse. It was a little muddled for me, if you reread it maybe you'd see what the commentors mean. Still positive vote for the effort, thanks for the hard work. Luvsalik xx |