| 2015-04-07 22:37:54 |
An Idol Fantasy
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Loads of people love this fantasy, it happens to be my personal favourite, I love playing the little girl or thr horny teenager, its sooo hot. I've never had thoughts about my own Daddy / Uncle whatever but I love the fantasy and thats what they are and in them anything is possible,, the only limit is your imagination. Thanks for the post and the wet pussy. Luvsalik xx |
| 2015-04-10 23:55:04 |
Doing Allison's Chores...Then Doing Allison
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I've just seen you've written more, so I'm off to read them, I think I've seen some caw work from you I'll have to search it out. L xx |
| 2015-04-11 10:50:52 |
Li'l Sis
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A well written and articulated piece. In the beginning, you gave a brief but comprehensive background, and slowly and tantalisingly began to draw me in, I began to get tingles and my pussy began to moisten, all was pretty phenomenal, I loved the path, as I guessed, that the video would be about lil sis, and it was shaping up very nicely indeed! Your descriptions of sharing the seating etc was painting a real picture , but then she slipped straight on his cock, no finesse, no gradual seduction/ him realising about the video., it really let it down for me at that point, seemed to be a bit clinical . It did come around during the sex but by then I felt a little disappointed. I did enjoy it but it could have been phenomenal if you'd continued as you started. You seem to have the talent, now go deep. Thanks for the read though. L xx |
| 2015-04-11 17:58:18 |
Practical Jokes_(1)
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I loved it, it made my pussy tingle and soaking wet, I love incest where the protagonists are loving and respectful. It was well written flowed nicely and wasn't repetitive, oh and I loved the ending. I totally agree with the review 2 below me ! Please the person 3 below me why read this stuff if your not interested, writers on here give their time freely, have a little gratitude and mostly things are fantasy , get it, not real, so no people don't hear and things are exactly how they want them, get a life or be curteous, surely it's not too hard just to say, not my preference but thanks, now bog off. Sorry rant over. Thanks for the great post added to my favourites. Luvsalik xx |
| 2015-04-14 16:01:19 |
Incest Cruise
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Thanks for the warm wet full body glow, I loved this story, I'm a sucker for the mushy stuff. Im not enamoured of anal intercourse (play yes, intercourse no thanks) but this was beautifully done and I even loved the fact she gave him her virginity. I think incest is better with love and respect, though everything has a place in sex. I love your style, there were a few name mistakes but nothing major and it didn't detract from the enjoyment I got, and I got a lot. Damn why didn't I have a son ! Lol. Thanks for the great work. Luvsalik xx |