| 2017-08-29 14:23:42 |
My girlfriend taught me to jack off in 7th grade
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Very nicely written, I hope to see more from you. Your story flowed very well, but could use a little more character development to make them breathe. Keep writing! The more you write the better you will get. Thanks for posting this. |
| 2017-08-29 14:22:19 |
My girlfriend taught me to jack off in 7th grade
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Very nicely written, I hope to see more from you. Your story flowed very well, but could use a little more character development to make them breathe. Keep writing! The more you write the better you will get. Thanks for posting this. |
| 2016-05-01 12:28:07 |
Finding a treasure at Winn-Dixie
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You write very well and tell a great story. I look forward to reading more of your work! |
| 2016-05-01 13:36:58 |
RETIREMENT--PART 1
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Nicely done. |
| 2016-12-06 13:06:27 |
A Farm House Story: Part 1 of 4: A Love Tryst
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Very nicely written, both on the interpersonal aspects of corporate life and the intimate interaction of the two protagonists. I hope you will keep writing! |