| 2018-02-11 20:44:28 |
Oh Wicked Wanda Chapter 3
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You are really on a role with this story. I hope to see more! |
| 2018-11-10 21:25:19 |
Learning to Kiss (and other stuff)_(1)
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I have just found a new favorite author. You write well, and the mechanics of your writing are close to professional. I guess you know the secret -- the more you write the better you get. Thanks for posting really hot stories and not stretching the truth like the guys with the 10 inch cocks who penetrate into the womb to pump in their gallons of spend. Given that the os uterus is smaller than a pencil in diameter, they must have pencil dicks. :) Keep writing! |
| 2019-03-18 21:40:35 |
Dream Cum True: Part 1_(1)
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It has only been 3 months, so I guess there may still be hope. It is too good an introduction to be wasted. Good writing and good plot with many possible threads. Come on polyamorous, tell us how to woo the reticent young maiden! |
| 2019-07-23 15:19:52 |
Camped out_(1)
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Not sure what Fat Albert's problem is. Very erotic story, that flows smoothly, and the mechanics (grammar, spellng, etc. is very good unlike many things posted here). I really enjoyed this and insist that your are a good writer. Of course, I speak with only the authority of having made my living writing professionally for the last 30 years. I'd like to see some sequels as I find these young women interesting. My only critique might be that it is a little thin on the background. However, who wants to read character development in a stroke story. That isn't what I came her for. Please keep writing! |
| 2019-07-23 15:43:14 |
Cheri
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Good story well told! You really should proof read your work. You write very well. Better yet, find someone else to read it before you post. We writers are often blind to the most obvious errors. Please keep writing! |