| 2017-11-04 13:50:35 |
Halloween Costume Malfunction
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Definitely a great story! Reluctant til the very end! Gave it a sense of realism that is missing from the vast majority of stories. It's also easy to connect with the characters. They seem so real in the ways they are flawed, and I love how they both grow in confidence afterward. They didn't become brainless sluts. They just matured a noticeable degree. I wouldn't be surprised if this was a true story. So well told! |
| 2017-06-24 08:03:42 |
Potential Part 19
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Incredibly hot! Sheer delightful torture! I only wish there were more! |
| 2017-09-24 04:36:57 |
The Unspoken Game_(0)
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Solid Story. I don't love it, but I like it. |
| 2017-09-24 04:46:59 |
Potential Part 20
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Yep, plenty of us still looking forward to more adventures with Evan! Sorry I didn't post a comment sooner on this chapter. Ultimately, it felt like a decent filler episode. Still looking forward to the meat and potatoes. |
| 2017-09-26 03:10:04 |
Potential Part 20
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I was kind of thinking adult content wise. There was good story, but without the exciting long anticipated sex scenes. Then there's the fear that something worse is quickly approaching. The end of reluctance. What truly makes a sex scene hot and realistic to me, is when the characters are reluctant to some degree. Like OMG we're outside and there's someone right around the corner. Getting started is hot, and then every moment knowing they could get caught is hot. Same with being naughty with a girlfriend with her parents home.. being all sneaky.. Then there's incest.. OMG but we're related.. but it feels good... even after they start.. they're still battling conflicting feelings.. Too many times, I see stories build up to a point where the characters have lost all inhibition.. they've become sexually depraved.. and finally they take that leap.. but there's no battle of emotions anymore.. the sex was just sex.. uh oh, we were caught.. do my parents hate me.. caught again.. not worried |