| 2016-12-21 23:19:54 |
Potential Part 12
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"suspense isn't really my thing" Ha! 14 was Fantastic! Thanks again for the Awesome story BiStander! Because I only read each story once or twice, I didn't even make the Ms. Style connection until further in 14. Excited to see how that plays out. Becky and Jason's relationship is going in a nice direction. I hope that ends well. At first I liked Evan a lot more than Jason. Now I'm starting to think Evan is just too emotional for his own good. Great characters and a fun read! |
| 2016-11-03 03:45:30 |
Potential Part 12
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Wow. A writer volunteers his time and provides his work for free to everyone and people bitch that he's not working hard enough. I had something similar happen in my life and I never volunteered my services again. We'll be lucky if Bistander chooses to write more for us again. |
| 2016-09-29 02:47:54 |
Poker Night with Sis Part 4
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No... the kids weren't there originally... |
| 2016-10-01 04:47:16 |
Potential 9
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Just read 12 .. feel like I might as well have done a shot of heroin. Just too good. |
| 2017-01-10 15:56:34 |
Potential Part 14
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I think part of the problem is the timing. When chapter 11 is up on nifty, chapter 10 is up here. So, I would give a review on chapter 11 on chapter 10's comment section. My vote of positive or negative, might not even make it onto the correct chapter. Especially if a couple chapters come out close to each other. All my praise may go to 13's comment section and nothing to 14's, and yet it was 14 I liked better than 13. Or vise versa.. I feel like the series has had some highs and lows, but overall more highs than lows; and 14 was one of my favorites. |