| 2016-03-12 21:09:48 |
Mutual Satisfaction Part 2_(0)
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Did the brother ever get relief? Ending was kind of a bummer, but I really liked the story. I have to agree with others that it was just too short. Thanks |
| 2016-03-13 14:52:10 |
Pure Strip Poker
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Snooze fest and I only say this because I fell asleep during 3 different attempts at reading it. It's long, dry, and barely erotic. Clearly, I like strip poker because I have written multiple stories on the subject, and that's why I'm forcing myself to read these, and it's sad that I find reading legal documents slightly more entertaining. However, it was still thrilling! I didn't care if the girls got naked because I can't see them and imagining them is even a bit rough with 4. I hope not too many more are introduced. I might have to take notes.. Maybe I'm just mentally slow, but I digress. I was still rooting for Larry! Who seemed to be called Jack every now and then. Are you Jack? LoL I have made that same mistake in my stories, but I edit them a little more rigorously and managed to take out the real names. I can't blame you for not editing this monstrosity more, but I digress again. Thanks for the story thus far. It's a thriller with my tastes in mind. |
| 2016-03-13 17:59:56 |
Pure Strip Poker - 2
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I liked it. Not near as dry as the first. Still pretty thrilling! Thanks for the story |
| 2016-03-13 19:09:25 |
Pure Strip Poker - 3
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The team play had me worried, but you nailed it during the game. I had higher hopes for the ending. Seemed like Jack might have pushed the boundaries a bit more, but it was good. Thanks again |
| 2016-03-13 20:04:03 |
Pure Strip Poker - 5 (Final)
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Disappointing but still good. Thanks for the series! |