| 2016-02-10 00:54:17 |
Poker Night with Sis
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Woohoo! Broke 100,000 views! New milestone for me! |
| 2016-02-13 06:53:39 |
My Story chapter 1
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Nice and sexy. Not a lot of story, but sounded like a good fuck. I wish I'd lost my virginity in the heat of an intense moment. |
| 2016-03-01 12:45:04 |
my best freind talked me into fucking my son
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I liked it. It was a little hard to read though. Always better to break up the text into paragraphs and dialogue. I kept losing my place; which is frustrating. It is a good short story though, and I hope you keep writing. I've taken a look at your other stories, and see that you have a block text habit. There's no telling how many negativing ratings you're going to get just for that, but if you don't care, that's on you. It also suggests that you might just be doing some sort of copy and paste scenario.. which suggests that this might not be your own work.. the lazy presentation suggests a lack of pride in the work, which suggests it's not your work.. if it is your work, have more pride in it.. it's good |
| 2016-03-17 13:15:54 |
My Sister's Habit
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Story wise this is almost like a typical porn. Very light on story and heavy on sex. I prefer heavy on story and somewhere in the middle on sex. But when a porn features a really hot woman, I don't care if the story sucks. This story was kind of like that. The sex was so well written, I didn't mind that the story was so light. The story wasn't bad either. It's a good piece of work. Thanks |
| 2016-03-12 20:54:39 |
Expect the Unexpected: Pitching a Tent
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I liked it. Unfortunately, I expected the unexpected. My expectations were not met.. Sometimes it's better to lower expectations, but it's a solid story anyway. Thanks |