| 2015-02-23 07:05:38 |
My Wifes Rape
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The story was fast paced. You did use traditional & conventional paragraphs in about 1/4 of the story. Then you fell off the wagon and returned to your sloppy ways. 53,010 people read this story by February 22, 2015 only 135 voted for your story. The software on this blog does not permit an up or down vote, thus what we have is not accurate. |
| 2015-02-24 07:15:27 |
REBOUND_(2)
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This is an excellent story about two adults who fall in love. In contrast to the immature adults near them. A true pleasure to read. |
| 2015-02-24 07:32:32 |
A Game For Liars
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" I work out constantly since my plan after high school is to join the military," He is also a star linebacker at near 6 feet. So the hero is a warrior and Bella could shot dead within a week in the real world. |
| 2015-02-26 05:50:53 |
Child's Play_(0)
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Hi Mystic47 you posted just 2 days ago and 55,848 readers. That to me is a very large number in only 2 days. You must have a loyal fan base. Other writers here could be in awe. |
| 2015-02-26 06:48:08 |
The summer of 2005 - Nicole - Part 1_(1)
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" this time with our mouths locked together as we kissed passionately throughout. I think it's fair to say that Nicole, at least for the time being, was mine." Nice that the writer has a bit of romance. |