| 2015-03-06 07:26:51 |
Violet Fire_(0)
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" it was frosted voer so you couldnt really see inside " Jimmy D please use the Spell Checker it would have caught both errors. Then all writers benefit from someone reading your story and finding typos. |
| 2015-03-06 07:55:19 |
HeartBreak Hotel
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This is a bordello , cat house and no charge WTF. |
| 2015-03-06 08:04:36 |
Dead Men_(1)
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Pulp Fiction inspired. Well done Writer. |
| 2015-03-06 08:14:04 |
Naked Witch_(0)
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" whihc i was more or less standing on. " Spell Check would have found that typo then you fix it. All writers need someone to proof read their stores. |
| 2015-03-15 02:22:45 |
Memories of the ex-wife
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re-formate |