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Comments from evebroughtanaxthistime
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2015-04-29 09:53:54 | Becoming The Favorite (Formatting Fixed) | Ok fuck this, I haven't had sex in 3 fucking years, cause I was 'confused'. How fucking confused must you be to say no to the amount of welI-built male sluts that had approached me during the last 3 years! I ruined my life! Everybody most probably thinks I've got some disease cause I told them I was celebate when the boyfriend-story didn't go down. It's not hard to see I was born for cock! Why did I have to read this story. If I had done my toenails instead, I would have been fine. Thanx a fucking shitload. I'm off to force-fuck some poor, unsuspecting dude, and it's all your fault. |
| 2015-05-21 19:43:29 | Different Love (re-edit) | Okay, you see, THAT'S why all you scumbag writers should re-edit your favourite stories. That was sooooo worth reading. Sammy can thank her minor gods Paul's in the past. Incompatible lovers have a few options: 1) stay together + no sex. 2)Stay together + sex with anybody else. 3)Gerbils. 1 Abstinence can drive you crazy, no. 2 can cost you money and... Bikes are low on petrol and bikers are generally happy with a beer or two and sex once a day. They then mostly opt to fiddle with their bikes, while generally leaving you alone, except if they also enjoy copious amounts of porn. Which can land a motorcycle engine on newspaper in front of your TV. Trust me. Don't carpet. Off to read next chapter. |
| 2015-06-20 00:03:51 | Young Tourists Enslavement_(1) | 'Please don't hurt her', 'the FBI will get you', 'little screams of surprise' ! Where did he find these chicks, barbydoll-country? He removes the restraints from all the girls meant to be put in the cells BEFORE he locks them away? And none of them have any enterprising thoughts of violence towards him? He goes to SLEEP with 2 distraught women next to him? Even my most timid friend would have had this dude reduced to a wet spot in 5 minutes. Jail cells down in his basement, my arse. |
| 2015-07-14 13:09:08 | SCREAM!!!!! | Cliff-hanger alert! Just joking. Very sweet story. Shot. |
| 2015-07-20 04:47:34 | The Protege_(1) | Dude, do not worry and stuff. I think if somebody tells you that you should get a professional to proof read your work and not just one of your friends, he/she means that your writing is good enough to really take a good gander at. It's quite a compliment. I agree with the Cadillac. You've got me very interested in the next chapter. You are almost the first writer who described characters as beyond comfortably rich and could pull it off (97% on it). I like the sinister vibration in the background. And of course, the raunchy, bossy sisters. |