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Comments from evebroughtanaxthistime
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2016-02-07 06:07:33 | 1812- Ariana's Voyage | Okay, here's the thing - You dumped a fairy-tale nonchalantly in Reality's (e.g. times, places, titles, possible time-line occurances, choice of weapons?) lap, while telling it to shut up and cope. You might have turned reality into a submissive bitch. In the middle of a war. Non-the-less, - our imminent future's gonna rock! So let me commence with 'the thing': As you have gone to the trouble of mixing Reality with La-La land and produced a babe(of a story), where others (mostly me) would nurse a cockroach proficient in the art of chinese opera, you might as well, sorta write some more. You know, with a lot of that pirate-guy all over it and lounging on...oh anything that comes to mind. I brake for fairy tales! Those with naked men... |
| 2016-04-17 23:05:36 | Innocence Enslaved Part 2: Overwhelmed | I think I just broke my male-simulator. |
| 2016-05-02 14:11:06 | Sleeping Sister Part 3 | What! No 3-way? Just joking. Didn't see your story at the time when you asked whether a 3-sum was favourable. Serves me right for reading other things than porn. But your alternative was cool! Oh, just one question - why would my celebrated sisters sweat in church (except if the priest was a babe), as they wear less than most people? Continue writing. You write very sexy scenes. |
| 2016-05-04 06:48:55 | Hellhounds | You are very special. Actually, you are exceptionally special. If you stop writing, your ideas, the way you see things, especially your animation of the gods (and I'm not talking about the clothes they wear), the worlds you are able to create, your convictions; will only be available to a small group of people. I am only a reader, so there's not much I can say other than that writing is a form of magick; learn its rules and bend it to your will. You are already shining. |
| 2016-05-09 17:50:03 | Aren't you afraid? P2_(1) | Man, you don't even rock, you're a fucking genius. Just to tease you - best magic cock syndrome story I've seen for a while - always on the edge, just out of reach, will he win or will he change, etc., never letting the tension wander too far off, if ever. Brilliant. |