| 2017-01-20 15:33:40 |
Sara's Protective Dad part 6
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The chatter got pretty "trailer-trash" like there, not that all trailer camp folk are trashy, but you know what I mean. Just that there is too much "in-and-out" descriptive sex; jeez leave something for the imagination.....or is that just too much to expect from Yanks? |
| 2017-02-01 07:35:56 |
THE WARD_(1)
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Just one minor matter, the organ involved in the male's ejaculation is the PROSTATE, just one "r"; otherwise a nice little story. |
| 2017-02-01 09:43:31 |
A welcomed Guest 3
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Does this story reflect, illuminate what appears to be an insatiable grasping for sexual activity in Americans? Why else would a writer of such ability as Pars has emphasise this so much in this story? If desires for sex and money are the principal motivators for Americans, we now know why they are such belligerant colonisers of the world. |
| 2017-02-01 11:37:30 |
A Welcomed Guest 5
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Pars, I wish you would get (understand) the difference between smirk and grin. A grin is a happy face, a smirk is a deceitful face, a face where a sneaky move is reflected. Otherwise, another good story. |
| 2017-02-04 09:00:40 |
Mondo's Clan part 2
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Hey, I like this story; not only entertaining but also educational - "Preppers" could learn a lot of survival skills here. And I speak as an old Aussie bush and desert living guy, as a team leader in geologic exploration. |