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Comments from pyroclast
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2016-07-10 14:34:56 | Light of Hellfire: Chapter 13 (FINAL) | Sage, damn good story; but in my view some of the sex episodes were far too long, in some instances taking near half a chapter, and to me it appeared as just gratuitous sex, sex to satisfy the wankers. I'm also inclined to agree that the story was in the same league as Captius' Awakening series. I am very happy that you are going to publish in book form. |
| 2016-07-11 14:18:44 | The Mission_(0) | Good beginning pars; this has potential for great things. |
| 2016-07-12 14:24:07 | The princess and the Captain | Pars, nice story - building up to a classic? Anyway, what I need to say is....for Christ's sake, please learn how to use commas. **Jim crawled between her legs and planted his mouth on her slit licking up and down her cunt as she gasped and shuddered heady with the scent of her he began to swirl his tongue around her clit as she gasped again and bucked her hips toward his mouth cumming and wetting his face as her juices began to flow from her grabbing her clit with his lips he sucked gently at first feeling her strain harder to get more of his mouth "AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!! OH MY GOD!! YES!!!!! DON'T STOP OH MY GOD DON'T STOP" she screamed out as she came again and again**. It's bloody terrible without commas! |
| 2016-07-22 10:07:00 | My daughters dildo epilogue | What a great way to introduce and develop an incest story; it was believable, honest and thought-provoking; it raised and dealt with a number of issues, especially the need for trust and keeping confidences intact. The legalities of under-age intra-family sex were raised but not developed, perhaps this issue could have been explored further. Apart from the entertainment, this story was decidedly topical; the writer has done us a great favour in presenting it. |
| 2016-07-22 13:18:15 | The Ritual_(0) | An interesting story, hopefully based on the reality of passed-down peasant knowledge. The explanation of how suitable ground temperature was determined was just so simple yet essential for cropping success. I wonder how many other skills have been lost due to further "civilization"? |