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Comments from pyroclast
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2016-04-12 12:38:57 | The Aquatic Boy_(1) | Must agree with the majority - what a pathetic effort at story-writing. Must be that time of the month when all the crappy stuff gets posted. To the "writer", please go and get another job, or better still, go back to school and learn how to write and get some emotional maturity. |
| 2016-04-12 12:46:16 | war for earth (chapter1) | OHhhhhhk, no! Another crappy attempt at story-telling. As I said elsewhere, it must be that time of the month, so we get all this waste-of-space, no-punctuation, incoherent ramblings. |
| 2016-04-12 14:15:06 | My Neighbors Down the Hall - Part 1 | Eight inches is pretty good, considering the average is around six inches, where I feature, but nothing like an old friend who is still very pissed off that one eighth of an inch deprives him of a foot of joy for his wife. Yes, there are some well-hung guys around, but a lot of guys do exaggerate. |
| 2016-04-12 14:56:39 | A Young Girl's Adventures with Rape - Part One | An interesting story. Maybe the isolation of the girl, being left to herself has got fantasies running that in the isolation and little close contact with parents allowed an unhealthy development leading to "I liked that - feeling like a piece of meat, just a cunt to be fucked" mental aberration. The writing was wonderfully descriptive, with deep emotions running underneath. |
| 2016-04-12 16:34:07 | Sacrifice 250 | What an interesting story; fertility rite basis for religion? But the finale, as the sacrificial "lamb" came to rest in the shaft at the control-room level, ha, wow! The "Epilogue" explains it all, and it's not too nerdy for most to "get it" and bring the story to a conclusion, rather than having guys like N.C.O hanging in space. We need a lot more stories of this calibre, not all the sloppy fuckathons that many seem to prefer. |