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Comments from pyroclast
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2016-04-10 05:43:54 | Plain Joe 2 The Return | Pars, I thought you knew better than this: Sliding painfully slow 'til I met her resistance. Kissing her deeply again I thrust through her hymen. Pars, the hymen is located at the introitus, the opening of the vagina within the vestibule of the vulva, not half way along the vagina as so many of you American writers seem to believe - or maybe American women are freaks with different vaginal structures! |
| 2016-04-10 10:09:09 | For the Love of Lana 11 | Pars, wonderful story; but please watch your punctuation, so many times you omit a comma, and it alters the meaning completely. Also that spelling sometimes goes haywire - rouge instead of rogue was one notable blot on your copybook. Did you check Amazon for Roget? Make sure you get the genuine Roget's Thesaurus. Cheers. |
| 2016-04-12 02:11:35 | A Jolly Good Show. Part1_(0) | Sick, psycho rapist story. The kind of male that spoils it for the rest of us. Surgically and mercilessly castrated future is best for him. And maybe cut his prick off too. |
| 2016-04-12 02:53:12 | A Jolly Good Show Part 2 | Yes, very juvenile fantasy; a psychotic writer of psychotic juvenile rape fantasies, needs two things, psychiatric care and re-education, together with a lot of emotional maturity added. |
| 2016-04-12 09:55:28 | A Very Short Story_(1) | Good short story of two women, one a mother, educating the next generation to atone for their spying. Well done, and very different to the usual porn on this site. |