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Comments from pyroclast
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2015-12-26 05:24:04 | Lost Empire 9 | This is a great story; I follow it carefully and smile with glee every time a new chapter appears. Thanks Pars, hope you had an enjoyable Christmas. Deejay |
| 2015-12-26 08:11:19 | Sister gives me a talk- part 1_(1) | Oops! He had never masturbated? Come on! It's instinctive, programmed into the juvenile male psyche. So get your facts right. OK, kid growing up in crazy fundamental religious environment, not responding to natural stimuli, yet older sister knows all the answers.... Come on, get real. Make your stories BELIEVABLE. |
| 2015-12-26 08:46:22 | What am I going to do with her? | Nice little story; may I suggest some pussy spanking as well? A wooden ruler or paint stirrer is a good spanker, they sting nicely, but do no harm, but don't spank the clit, just spank the outer labia individually. And it is much, much more effective when no hair is present!! |
| 2015-12-29 08:27:51 | The Snow storm stranger pt1_(0) | Yeah, must agree with the other posters - don't quit your day job, you have no talent as a writer as you know nothing about planning and presentation. What you have "written" is an outpouring of thoughts and ideas, a real dog's breakfast. And that's about it. If you are serious about writing stories, go back to school, study written prose and spend a lot of time learning how to write. There are no short-cuts into writing, you have to do the hard miles of learning. |
| 2015-12-29 09:07:32 | Sailing with my daughter and friend | Huh? A barrier well up inside her vagina? She some freak? Or you just so fucking ignorant of a woman's physiology that you go with the yankee myth of a hidden hymen. In the rest of the world, the hymen is at the ENTRANCE to the vagina, so I gather you are not at all familiar with virginal status in women, maybe have no idea about women at all; you are just a pretend male. Poor boy. |