| 2015-11-29 14:53:09 |
Allison 3
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One of the better stories on sexstories.com. I thoroughly enjoyed this growing tale of incest between a young girl and her big brother, not for its incest but for its real interpersonal interaction between two people of different ages but intense attraction for each other. A lot of the site's "writers" could learn a lot from this story. This could be real, a true to life tale, and is far from the formulaic drivel usually posted. |
| 2015-11-29 16:10:22 |
Allison 1
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Ouch! And they're still around, pushing all that "God LOVES You" stuff to strengthen the control. Is it people's simplicity or man's quest for power that spawns religion? Whatever, parallel roads of social control that are seen to be destructive flourish. Again, man's stupidity? Whether it be the Mormons, the Bible-bashing South, the Taliban, The Spanish Inquisicion, Islamic State, it's all about mind control. And here we see, in this story, the destruction of a family due to religious centred intolerance manifested at the personal level of the father and mother, aided and abetted by their brainwashed children. It is a sad story, but it shows hope in the future. It is also a story that is well above the intellectual capacity of many readers to fully comprehend. I look forward to the next chapters. |
| 2015-11-30 09:50:28 |
Allison 4
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Hmmmm, I hope this is continued, too many threads to be tailed, and a couple of lives to be lived. I, too, felt that it became repetitous; the sex became the story rather than the embellishment, and, yes while that first full penetrative sex is mind-blowing, it has to blend in with reality. Too much emphasis on the incest thing, rather than the mind-strangling evil of controlling religion. As I said, the sex became the story, not the embellishment. I have allowed some spelling errors, flagged by the system, to remain; my postings are not stories. But repeated spelling errors, that would have been flagged by a decent word-processor during writing, continue to worry me. They cause me to stumble as I read, rather than go with the flow of the story. You have a lot to give as a writer, you appear to have some "worldly" experiences to call upon to feed your themes; I envy you. I look forward to your continued writing with great anticipation. |
| 2015-11-30 10:54:04 |
Allison 5
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Yes, it was a fine story, the sex did become a bit over-the-top for a while, but taking the balance into consideration, probably became tolerable. Hahaha, I can hear the wankers wailing from here! Thanks for the series, I am now a little more understanding about the American preoccupation with incest now, is it due to the reaction to the mind-control of the wacky religious nuts that seem to control your country? Whatever, incest is not such a big deal in the more balanced world. |
| 2015-12-01 13:54:35 |
Best friend has a deep secret fantasy. Chapter 2, The Reluctant Confession.
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Hmmmmmm, some praise, some criticism; noticed you got this "Big Dick", Incest fetish badly; spoils your stories. Also still repetative, padding that needs to be edited out. And you have been told before by another guy that cloth is used to make clothes that we wear. So c'mon, up your ante bro, you are getting good advice from a number of people, take advantage of it. |