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Comments from pyroclast
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2016-04-18 09:52:34 | Bait and Switch Retype - Ch 07-08 | Doing well, but you gave the maths professor the surname Polkins (that of the campus nurse) instead of Frankens. That's the sort of thing that a proof-reader should pick up, and that's why you should get someone else doing your proof reading. |
| 2016-04-17 14:37:07 | Bait and Switch Retype - Ch 05-06 | Good story line, but watch getting the names of the guys right as one anon poster said. Can you get someone to proof-read for you? Doing it yourself can lead to errors as we have seen. Thank you for following your late buddy's request. |
| 2016-04-17 12:39:26 | Bait and Switch Retype - Ch 01-02 | Anonymous readerReport 2015-05-30 22:02:13 MESSAGE TO THE STAND IN AUTHOR.... YOU, Mr Anonymous, are a gutless arsehole, you post filth directed at someone whilst hiding in secrecy, a really cowardly act, a CUNT ACT in fact. I fully agree with the author, kiddie-porn is just filth for psychos. |
| 2016-04-17 11:28:00 | Aquarius, bitch gets her day. C03 | Ekoos007, your story has aroused my interest; it is quite different to most of what I have seen here, and with further development could become of interest to many readers. How you develop this is in your hands, but if you read some of pars001 's stories you will have a good example to follow. Please don't be discouraged by seeming low interest, many readers don't post comments, others will hound you to put more sex into the stories - even demanding rape. There are some crazy people reading on this site, but there are also some who will be friendly and guide you. You will soon know who to listen to. Best wishes and good luck for the future. |
| 2017-01-11 13:55:53 | Lost Empire 37 | There are times when I could wring Pars' neck! But only because he hasn't delivered that new chapter that we all are frantically waiting for; but in fact, really, I know that the wait is worth its weight in gold because the quality is what makes this series so outstanding. I can understand Pars' not feeding chapters out like sausages, he has pride in his work and deservedly so; so how does he manage to write other quality work at the same time? My hat off to you Pars! Have a Happy New Year. |