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Comments from Clover Ernest
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2016-08-04 12:08:47 | The Black Willow 3 | great ending to the series. loving your newer works hust as much |
| 2016-08-04 13:05:30 | A Taste of Honey_(1) | great story pars. i love a good story infused with feelings |
| 2016-12-27 06:43:12 | Santa IV | Came back to read again, since nothings been posted in 4 days, and to all you little bitches complaining "you rushed it to get it out by xmas" shit the fuck up and be grateful he even bothered to match it to the same Luciferdamned MONTH. LET ALONE THE SAME FUCKING SEASON. He got the sorry out so that YOU could read it. Be glad he's even doing that. Again, amazing job, pars. Love your stories like no others, just like Pyro said. Continue to write mind blowing material you fucking literature god |
| 2016-09-18 03:46:16 | A Welcomed Guest 2 | Unholy fuck! I cone back here to remember what the chapter was about and i see how shitty my typing on my phone is. Dammit Swype!! |
| 2016-09-18 04:40:08 | Sister dropping her bra 1 | While i know you're probably already working on the next part, i do wish to give some insight. While the grammar, spelling, and general writing could be improved upon, those aren't all that bad. I do however age with many of the others in that 1) the transitions and details of scenes are leaving write a bit to be desired, 2) you could adda but of a twist with Margot by not just having her interrupt, but instead then of straight up wanting to join, maybe have her reject it at first, yet tjreaten or even try to expose them to their parents, then perhaps Sophia services her and convinces her to give Marc a try. 3) eventually something has to be conference to them not using a condom or pill, either because they repeatedly don't use one or it was just bad timing that first time, but Linda think a little ahead with actions and consequences. 4) if u do want to have an example of an author going from absolute crap for grammar to a literary masterpiece, check out pars001. |