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Comments from James Dylan Dean
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2017-05-26 04:28:09 | Senior Moments | This was a terrific story much like the ones I try to write. No jumping immediately into bed, and heart warming feelings highlighting the action. I loved it! And don't worry about the grammer nazis. They have there place but a heart warming story trumps a well written fuckfest every time for me. |
| 2017-06-12 11:14:07 | I Own You Cassidy | A GOTH's Wet dream date??? Just kidding. This could be the start of a really interesting episodic story. How did this situation come about? What about Salem? Where is it going. Who is downstairs? How does it end? I like the spare dialog and scenery. It focuses attention on the situation. Keep writing. |
| 2017-06-12 12:12:16 | CLIFF AND THE TWINS | Hmmmmmm. Thought that I would hear from Gina on this one. |
| 2017-06-15 22:59:00 | Healing | Heartwarming love story. Among the best of its kind. |
| 2017-06-20 06:46:23 | SERIOUS KINK 5 | Over the years I have come to the notion that women are just as trans-actual as men are. I personally strongly believe in the basic premise of either trading services, objects or favors. I have little sympathy for the users of people of this world and in fact have suffered from some of them very gravely. Along with this, I have come to the notion that most of the time, women agree to or even seek intimacies for practical reasons. Not that they don't truly enjoy them when they are done right. But, reasons such as: making a living, pleasing a mate, securing a mate, getting a big favor, getting a baby, retribution against a rival, to feel better physically or emotionally are probably significant in most of their entries into the intimacy mode. In this story, the main motives for Darla's mode of conduct were to promote her comfort and to set up Brad for a very large favor as we will see. The mechanical depiction that you alluded to is very appropriate to the scene. |