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Comments from InkWriter1
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2017-06-02 05:58:37 | Mom Caught Me pt. 2 | Still mixing past and present tense. Try to stick to one. |
| 2017-06-02 05:59:16 | Mom Caught Me pt. 2 | I love how fast they get used to the incest. The mother makes a fuss but it's like she's not even trying to resist. Still mixing past and present tense. Try to stick to one. |
| 2016-12-24 03:46:17 | Accidents Happen_(2) | For me, it was the language the kept bringing me out of it. Also the pacing was really fast. One second she's helping him and all of a sudden, with no hesitation she just starts giving him oral. It's ok but could use a lot of improvement. |
| 2017-05-27 06:06:46 | Arthur owns his mom & teacher | Well a view just means they clicked on the story, not that they actually read it. I mean that title is quite enticing, but there is not way to know how good a story is until after it's been viewed. I like the overall concept but it could use a lot of work. Everything from spelling to punctuation to grammar needs to be fixed, and an actually story might be better. Plus, I'm not sure what the point of making chapters is if they don't separate anything. 23k views is good, but the amount of votes and percentage say otherwise. |
| 2017-05-27 03:24:35 | The submissive couple | Ok start for a series, but the grammar and formatting could use a lot of work. |