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Comments from InkWriter1
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2017-03-24 06:59:44 | Denise the submissive mom_(0) | This could benefit from a lot of punctuation. |
| 2017-03-22 22:38:09 | Sisters By The Pool Part 8 | This one was really great. I've been waiting for another threesome with these three. |
| 2017-03-18 19:14:36 | Sisters By The Pool Part 7 | I really liked the ending to this one, and the stealth sex was pretty hot too. I hope you develop his relationship more with Danielle. They haven't done much aside from sex and they already seem to be in love. |
| 2017-03-15 04:21:32 | Sophomore Summer Kickoff Party | Fun story, didn't feel like everyone just wanted to sleep with him. Grammatically, I recommend you make your paragraphs smaller and separate the dialogue so that it's easier to see in the wall of text. Also, it would help if you kept mentioning their names, rather than just using pronouns, that way we can keep track of which girl he's with. |
| 2017-02-22 19:56:23 | Sisters By The Pool Part 5 | The sudden harem surprised me, and this story is quickly turning into something else. |