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Comments from InkWriter1
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2017-01-16 18:07:24 | Sisters By The Pool Part 2 | I like the problem he has in the background of who is he going to date. |
| 2017-01-16 05:46:19 | Sisters By The Pool | This is a fun and hot story. It's quick to the point but it has enough to be descriptive. |
| 2017-01-20 04:08:22 | Sisters By The Pool Part 3 | It feels like he's doing a lot more with Hailey. He did it with her two full times and then some, and only once with Danielle. Why so much deceit. Also, I find it hard to believe Danielle didn't know they were having sex when playing games. She knows what a slut her sister is, they're naked, and she's on his lap. How did she NOT know what was happening!? |
| 2017-01-20 05:20:11 | Daddy's Little Girl_(5) | Kind of an odd place to end it. The rest was good though. |
| 2017-01-22 21:38:40 | Senior Dare | I liked the concept and most of the story, though you were repetitive a lot. That ending could use some work too. Overall, good job, hope to see more. |