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Comments from InkWriter1
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2017-04-16 19:07:43 | Mom Caught Me pt. 1 | Well that was quite casual of his mother and sister. Interested to see where this goes. |
| 2017-04-16 19:08:57 | Mom Caught Me pt. 1 | Your tags are a bit off, there was only one male. |
| 2017-04-16 07:49:04 | THE GIRLS NEXT DOOR_(1) | Maybe try spacing out the paragraphs to make it easier to read. Other than that it was good. |
| 2017-04-16 01:31:21 | Coquette and her cuckold (Part 4) | That ending ruined it for me. Fits better with a thriller rather than erotic fiction. |
| 2017-04-16 01:32:32 | Coquette and her cuckold (Part 4) | Also you should add "Death" as a tag for readers that don't want to read that. |