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Comments from InkWriter1
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2017-03-14 23:11:08 | Night in the Park, Where the Dogs Are | Overall a good story, made the boss sound like a strong character. Though you should double check things. You changed Andressa's name to Alessandra at one point. In the elevator, she was "face to face" with the cleaners, while sticking her butt at them. Not sure how you can do both at the same time. |
| 2017-02-01 06:19:39 | Sisters By The Pool Part 4 | Honestly don't know what you're going to do with Danielle, seems like he's lying and doing things behind her back more and more. |
| 2017-02-01 06:33:49 | Me, My Girlfriend, and Her Mom - The Series | Hmm, not what I was expecting, and it seemed to focus on a lot. Made sense somewhat at first, though the rape was a surprise. That ending seems like it was played for laughs though. |
| 2017-04-11 08:54:22 | Sisters By The Pool Part 9 | Now Melanie huh? He sure is getting all the girls. |
| 2017-03-24 07:20:35 | Locked-up Little Fuck Toy | Pretty great story. I love the mindset she gets in. It's all explained quite well. |