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Comments from Dudley Dowrong
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2018-07-23 11:47:53 | Horny Lady Trucker | would have voted positive if I had any more votes. Think I've read this once before & looking forward to the upcoming party. Neat the way U mix Ur stories into Ur life or vice - versa. U show such talent in tastefully presenting details of the fucking scenes. We all have our personal likes & dislikes. Ours seem to agree. That agreement of values seems to make Ur stories so much more enjoyable. Sex is for sharing, not domination or abuse. Ur stories indicate that is Ur attitude, not simply vulgar sensationalism. Thank you for Ur attitude & sharing Ur fantastic talent.. Congratulations on a job WELL DONE !!! |
| 2018-07-23 11:48:00 | Horny Lady Trucker | would have voted positive if I had any more votes. Think I've read this once before & looking forward to the upcoming party. Neat the way U mix Ur stories into Ur life or vice - versa. U show such talent in tastefully presenting details of the fucking scenes. We all have our personal likes & dislikes. Ours seem to agree. That agreement of values seems to make Ur stories so much more enjoyable. Sex is for sharing, not domination or abuse. Ur stories indicate that is Ur attitude, not simply vulgar sensationalism. Thank you for Ur attitude & sharing Ur fantastic talent.. Congratulations on a job WELL DONE !!! |
| 2018-07-23 12:46:16 | Trucker's Joy | My comment got erased, but it was positive, Just can't vote any more today! |
| 2018-07-23 19:41:20 | Pizza Delivery_(0) | Paragraphs need to be shorter, especially in conversational dialogue. Also, I don't see this installment as "The End???" when you have set up for a party foursome in 3 weeks. Realizing this story was posted today (7/23/18) there hasn't been time to post "Pizza Delivery Pt 2/ The Party" unless it has already been written. If it is, I suggest U proof read it making shorter paragraphs , especially in dialogue. Deions are good, also details like the flat tire make it more realistic. U start & stop conversation with " " which some authors overlook. I don't remember seeing spelling errors or tense problems (but I can't spell). Look forward to "The Party" when U get it together. Please read some other authors like "mypenname3000 & oldman6976 To evaluate their paragraph construction & conversational dialogue in" " & paragraphs for easier & quicker reading; therefore easier & more enjoyable. |
| 2018-07-23 20:38:05 | The Camping Trip_(6) | If I could vote, it would be positive. Excellent scenario, To me, it should have not ended where it did. I think after Bobby fucked Mom, he should have had a chance to fuck Sis, too! I tend to think Marie, Mom, & Dad had a previous "jump start to their incest" and this is the 1st chance they used to include Bobby in the fun. Now Mom & Sis can both be DPed by Dad & Bobby. Also, there might be a chapter "Back Home from Camping" Other comments tend to agree with my position. Good luck in Ur future installments. |