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Comments from Dudley Dowrong
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2018-07-21 12:54:26 | Wife whores out daughters to pay off gambling debt(Part 6 Revenge) | ,Again, my positive vote is for your creativity, to bring closure to this tragic series of events presented so realistically. As a reader, I could feel the hurt & rage of the family (especially Dad/husband). The unanswered question, I tend to think Krystal did hang herself because the way she despised Ed but enjoyed his sexual foreplay & outcome of her multiple orgasms with him. She realized the depth of her fall from deciency & could not live with herself. Why would the Boss destroy an money making asset? That's my evaluation. She betrayed her marriage, husband, daughters, & herself, submitted to humiliation & had become a sex slave as well as enslaving her whole family. To her mind, death was the only way to get rid of that anguish & pain (mentally, emotionally & physically)!! So Sad. Your resolution was admirable even though unlawful as was the slavery enfourced by the Mob. Kristal's appearance, excellent ending. |
| 2018-07-21 17:03:43 | Teaching Her Girls How To Fuck(Part 1 The Mother) | I was so engrossed in the story line that I overlooked Ur errors. Unusual approach to teach teen girls about sex.. I think the main thing, she was just hot & didn't want her girls to wonder, "What is that man doing to Mom?" That would give them more of a scare than, " Girls, I want U to see what happens between a man & a woman when they engage in sexual activities." "I'm going to find a nice guy & will be back in a little bit. There is nothing to be afraid of." |
| 2018-07-21 17:30:45 | OMG My Wife Is A Porn Star(Part 2) | I would have voted Positive if I had any more votes..Also, I am so glad you gave closure to the scenario in Pt 2. There are so many authors that don't seem to do that & it's very disappointing. Thank you for sharing talent with us. I look forward to reading many more of your works. Right now into Ch 2 of "Mom teaches her girls how to fuck" Looking for it, I saw this Pt 2 "Wife a Porn Star" and wanted to see your finish. Good job in my opinion!! |
| 2018-07-21 20:31:41 | Teaching Her Girls How To Fuck(Part 3 Wanda) | Again, I was so engrossed by the story line, I neglected to list Ur errors. Good creativity, delicate presentation of a delicate subject. "How old should a girl be before she becomes a woman?" One answer is, "When she wants to." but she must also be aware of the consequences (child bearing & rearing responsibilities). Appears Peg had thought thru her plan at least a month or 2 to have a 13 & 15 yo & herself on the pill. She was horny & didn't feel it fair to get relief and leave her girls "in the dark". She felt responsibility for them get the right information about guys & what a considerate prospect of a boyfriend would be like. More parents should feel this way about rearing children to face life more realisticly. Not unknowing or with Hollywood fantacies !! |
| 2018-07-21 20:31:45 | Teaching Her Girls How To Fuck(Part 3 Wanda) | Again, I was so engrossed by the story line, I neglected to list Ur errors. Good creativity, delicate presentation of a delicate subject. "How old should a girl be before she becomes a woman?" One answer is, "When she wants to." but she must also be aware of the consequences (child bearing & rearing responsibilities). Appears Peg had thought thru her plan at least a month or 2 to have a 13 & 15 yo & herself on the pill. She was horny & didn't feel it fair to get relief and leave her girls "in the dark". She felt responsibility for them get the right information about guys & what a considerate prospect of a boyfriend would be like. More parents should feel this way about rearing children to face life more realisticly. Not unknowing or with Hollywood fantacies !! |