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Comments from Dudley Dowrong
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2018-07-16 21:16:04 | Family Obligations 2 | It would have been nice to have another chapter about their dates & Alesha's visits to his home during the next month then the fourth weekend in the next month when she didn't wear the "Submission Collar". It would be after graduation before she could "move in & marry" Jonny but that would be another nice chapter to add. Thereby creating more personality & "more than sex" in the story. Knowing the unique relationship Jonny's family have here, it puts their love & sex at completely different level. |
| 2018-07-17 14:25:05 | Spitroast | This is exactly how to introduce a slow taker to sex of any kind. If someone is open enough to watch a video, they will usually be aroused. With a "partner" right there beside them, they will (in their mind) project what's on the screen to a reality with the partner(s) beside them. Once it's in their mind, the next step is to take action to what they see & think to become a physical reality. As portrayed here, when the "desires, [monster], (feelings)" are awaken, it's hard to put them asleep again. Just like any addiction, one just wants more & more. Just like reading these stories, it's hard to slow down or quit. "What's going to be different in this one different from the last one?" II really like this writers approach, How does this story play out?" "How does this story compare to his others?" "Is this story hotter than the last one? How many times will this one make me want to climax (with a little help)?" Good writers can do it just like a good video |
| 2018-07-17 14:25:11 | Spitroast | This is exactly how to introduce a slow taker to sex of any kind. If someone is open enough to watch a video, they will usually be aroused. With a "partner" right there beside them, they will (in their mind) project what's on the screen to a reality with the partner(s) beside them. Once it's in their mind, the next step is to take action to what they see & think to become a physical reality. As portrayed here, when the "desires, [monster], (feelings)" are awaken, it's hard to put them asleep again. Just like any addiction, one just wants more & more. Just like reading these stories, it's hard to slow down or quit. "What's going to be different in this one different from the last one?" II really like this writers approach, How does this story play out?" "How does this story compare to his others?" "Is this story hotter than the last one? How many times will this one make me want to climax (with a little help)?" Good writers can do it just like a good video |
| 2018-07-18 00:22:49 | Karen's Story-3 | Ur usual expressive self. Good work. Looking forward to the following parts! I kinda figure Pete &/or Raymond will be brought in somehow. Don't know about Mom & Dad, but the way you write family fantasies, wouldn't be surprised. I remember Family Obligations & Another bro/sis situation where they go with Mom & Dad to a New Years Orgy at the Aunt & Uncles house. |
| 2018-07-18 01:07:48 | Karen's Story-4 | If possible, Ur deion detail is getting better. I'm a little surprised at Mom & Dad's separation; at least it appears that they are going to cool off a little before the final decision. I'm confident that Karen, if not she & Jeanie both end up giving Dad some comfort fucks. Don't know if Pete will make it to Paris or screw Mom when she gets back. Don't know if Jeanie & Pete fuck but no doubt Pete will keep Karen happy while Robert is away |