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Comments from Dudley Dowrong
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2018-07-18 07:26:02 | Karen's Story-6 | ust about as I expected, except, Dad hasn't yet had Karen, but with her panties in hand, tomorrow, he may get more than a back rub. Ur learning how to create suspense for the next installment. Ur anticipation of what is to come next is improving & holding Ur audience (me at least) spell bound as to what creation of events to be revealed in the next episode or later, AWESOME!!! |
| 2018-07-18 08:39:34 | Karen's Story-7 | Well, just about as I expected, I didn''t expect the divorce to come about; I also expected a DP in this installment. Jeannie & Dad haven't yet copulated, but there is another installment to go. As I mentioned in previous sections & stories, Ur skills have improved greaty, The gay sex added with Pete & Robert seems natural with all the background in the previous scenarios. A little bit of a surprise but not shocking. I'm a little disappointed to see the last installment come. Maybe Karen could travel with Robert on his next film assignment & Dawn be there for a GGB trio! Talk about sexual tension, That would jump off the page until their joining. of desires to please Robert meld into a friendship,,even to the 69 enjoyment . of course mainly for Robert's pleasure (Ha ha)!! |
| 2018-07-18 09:24:48 | Karen's Story- Final | Agree with the 2 comments. The closing was not what I expected but still good. Maybe a little anti-climatic. .(Whatever that means?) Since this was posted 7 yrs ago, I feel my comments are mute; doubtfully U can learn anything from them, except that yrs later U can see that in Ur early efforts, U showed promise. Hopefully U have progressed beyond amatur. yet from time to time review Ur earlier efforts for encouraging comments such as this. Love Ur scenarios, shorts & series. Good luck in future efforts, Thank U for sharing Ur talent with us.. |
| 2018-07-18 09:34:24 | Janice's Mom Joins The Group | Don't know what my problem is but have yet to find the installment after this one. To my knowledge, I've read everything except "Family Lessons" and found nothing to match Janice's stories. Many I've read twice & undoubtly enjoyed them the second time. |
| 2018-07-18 10:14:41 | Family Therapy_(0) | WOW!!! What else to be said. The anticiipation of Mom & Mark, then a trio w/ Ashley & Mom with Mark is just outstanding. Hardly wait to get to the next installment! |