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Comments from Dudley Dowrong
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2018-07-16 10:47:44 | Family Home Stay 4&5 | My comment didn't even get pposted, Guess I didn't do it riight. I expected a DP, but Rupert hasn't been sent home either & the night is not over. Like I said earlier," as good or better than Ch 5 ! So far, I've not located Ch 6 to see how the story goes forward. This is n;ot a place of closure or completion. Thank you for sharring Ur talent with us. |
| 2018-07-16 11:26:30 | Janice_(1) | Such sexual disorders have been documented in men & women. This scenario is a unique example as to the treatment of Janice.disorder. Usually more detail is given in foreplay & actions in these fuck sessions. But as active as Janice is with as many partners as she "entertains" that would extensive. Ch 2 & 3 will surely be intresting as her Mom, Polly, & Ellen get more involved (I assume). Your English keeps getting better, Congratulations. Thank you also for the way U break paragraphs thru out Ur stories. Good work!. |
| 2018-07-16 12:14:48 | Janice's Mom | Now U are starting to add surprises along with some of the expected outcome implied by the previous installments. Better creativity. Also in this edition the detail deion of "foreplay" & serious action are better than the previous entry. Looking forward to Mom joining the group. Does Dad show up in the group? Is he discovered as cheating rather than just suspected? How do Ray & Polly take to the addition in the group? Will all these enquriing questions be answered later? GOOD WORK, IN BUILDING THE ANTICIPATION! |
| 2018-07-16 13:07:00 | Janice's Mom Joins The Group | Again, here, U have a few surprises as well as the expected. Ur name with all Ur stories are on my screen & yet I've not recognized any more titles of this story displayed. I'm hoping this isn't how the installments end. Ditto to what I said earlier about diions & paragraphs. |
| 2018-07-16 20:58:21 | Family Obligations 2 | U would have gotten my positive vote if I had any more to give. Of all the Mom/Son relationships I've read, U have revealed more of the soul of such a bonding relationship beyond sex to a very special & unique love. Alesha actually described it & realized that only her son (future) could complete that love she wants to experience like her future husband & mother-in-law (who she already sees as much more than even a mother but her sexual mentor to the pleasure Alesha's husband) For some reason, paragraphs ran a little more cramped & together here than in some of Ur other works.Other than that, technical work is great. Loved the scenario, & turned out exactly as I expected. I think Jonny wanted to take Alesha home with him in Ch 1 but hadn't discussed it with family & wasn't sure how she might react to the unique family arrangement . He was right; if it had not been for the eroticism that aroused her & her love for him, she couldn't have tolerated it with her parents upbringing. |