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Comments from Dudley Dowrong
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2018-07-26 13:19:58 | watching her parents in a new light | If I could vote, it would be positive. Great scenario, excellent deions,Character building was ok. Background was given as necessary & had more impact as interjected rather than at the 1st of the story. Now, Mel's future can be varied in any number of ways and her relationship with family members, -- Mom, Dad, Uncle, Killer & Duck. Since she likes sex, how far is she going to go & to whom will she go to find satisfaction? ? Is a part available? |
| 2018-07-26 23:08:53 | Preacher's Sinful Daughter Chapter 3: Sinning Behind the School | These installments are just as good or better than the 1st time I read them. Great! Some of the scenes seem unrealistic but they are hot hot hot just the same. My experience is that most girls don't like sucking dick, but once they approach 40, that seems to change. Several of my encounters & now my wonderful wife of 25 yr even has initiated intimate relations between us by sucking my dick & swallowing. Doesn't happen every time but often enough to keep us both happy.. I fondly remember the 1st she asked me to "do her behind" I've asked her to shave but she has balked to that, I don't know why. Several of Ur series are my favorites, especially the way they intertwine = Doctor, Daughter Slut , twins,, & Harem |
| 2018-07-27 02:04:52 | Preacher's Sinful Daughter Chapter 5: Sinning with a Woman | I didn't expect it to be Mom but thought it was a great surprise that it was/is Mom. I don't remember if she gets revenge on Carolyn or not But I do remember that the upcoming gang bang is unforgetable.as a lot of old fucks show up to help celebrate her "Cumming out/in Party" hot HOT HOTTER ! ! I would have liked a detailed deion of Mom cleaning out her pussy & then they end up in a 69 with Dad fucking an asshole. Your deions ars so hot! |
| 2018-07-27 11:39:40 | Preacher's Sinful Daughter Chapter 6: Sinning for the Cameras | I agree with the comments. It would be awesome to see Book 2, "The Preachers Granddaughter Sluts Again" I also agree that Carolyn & Ricky should be brought back to do foursomes with Lexie & Pete adding Gary & Mom for a 6 way orgy. Now talk about HOT, such foursome or sextet would be HOTTER. If Gary & Mom are a little slow because of age, Veronica & her boyfriend could complete the sextet. All of your works I've read are the best. I've given Ur name to other authors as an example of good techniques of presentation. Very few authors match or exceed Ur quality all the way around. The only criticism I can give you is ideas to enhance existing works or for future works. I have Ur name as a top author. Thank you for sharing Ur talent with us. Congratulations on a job well done. |
| 2018-07-27 20:45:13 | Twin Sister Delights Chapter 1: The Slut Coaches the Twin Sisters | The way U tie Ur stories together is absolutely awesome. This is the 3rd or 4th story tied to each other, Incest Harem, Doctors Family, Daughter Slut; Twins, Sister Slave. I think that kind of creativity is fantastic.The only thing I have trouble with here, is the twins speaking Jap to each other & reader not realizing it until the next sentence or so. Other than that little quirk, it's great! Just trying to give U ideas to make it more understanable reading. |