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Comments from Dudley Dowrong
| Date | Story title | Comment |
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| 2019-05-03 02:24:13 | Perchance To Dream Pt. 3 | A follow up 4th ch would be great. Love Ur work, especiallly with the convenient twists. Not only does Mom want a divorce, but she has find someone that wants her & has the money to support her in current or better lifestyle. Now, the only difficulty is the black fuck & how are Alice & Jim going to share Mel without getting in each others way. Mel said a threeway is out but did Jim & Alice agree to that. Perhaps there are some latent bonds they don't realize. That could get interesting..!! I think Mel should do a 3way with Latrice & Jim to protect her interest & know exactly what's going on. !! I love Ur work. The last time I suggested a final chapter scenario, the authors was much better. Joe,bet'cha Mel can come up with a good one if U can't. |
| 2019-05-03 02:34:22 | Perchance To Dream Pt. 3 | I've not found "Melanieatplay" in the author's list or bring it up in "Search" |
| 2019-05-03 04:07:27 | Perchance To Dream Pt. 4 | Joe U R 1 lucky dude. What U & Mel wrote seems 1st hand experience. Every- thing is so exotic, complete, & livid. I know from 1st hand experience what it is to meet someone @ 50-52 & find out she is so much more than I deserve or expected. She's not perfect but she's mine, I'm hers, & we wouldn't have it any other way. My heart nearly burst thinking of how wonderful she is, the best I've ever known. I don't want to tell my sons that, it might take something from their mother (passed 27 yrs ago.) One thing that makes our relationship so close & vibrant, her husband passed 28 yrs ago; we understand feelings are different but the love we had before us was as real as what we share now. We've even cried together remembering our losses of the past, but glad we have each other to face the future. I believe what U reveal in print is therapeutic when received in a right way. |
| 2019-05-04 02:33:36 | The Imperfect Storm Chapter 1 | Not a lot of character building of Trent & Whit until later in the story with dialog. To me, not the best technique but it seemed to work. Let me go ahead to Ck out Ch 2. I don't see how "Sisters & friends relates to "Storm" , but I'm not read it all. As three sisters here, there was Vickie, Nessa & Michelle all wanting to fuck Vickies brother. Thank U for sharing Ur talent, The way U handled Jim, Alice & Mel was great. That was a love story with depth, gentleness (in spite of the spanking) and caring.This "Storm" With the written story in the middle, is just a fuck story so far. The scene has been set for intrigue, & cheating loving, depending on Whit's attitude toward sharing Trent with her sisters. |
| 2019-05-04 04:01:48 | The Imperfect Storm Chapter 2_(2) | Better with more character revelation, especially the changes in Whit. Also Trent is mostly setting things for a Sister Bitch "Fuck Off" to see can be the most dirty "Sister Bitch" Ur work is alright,but finally I see the connection. I need to go back to read the section where Vicky takes her brothers virginity & the next time. So far I don't see the love story development. That' one thing I've enoyed about Ur stories, the use of sex being the expression of deeper meanings. Because I love U so much, I want to share the most intimate experience possible with U. Ur presentation of this type scenario is awesome;the descriptions of sex is so HOT & detailed. Just like being there sometimes. |