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Comments from Dudley Dowrong
| Date | Story title | Comment |
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| 2019-05-04 04:52:37 | The Imperfect Storm, Chapter 3 | Very close to what I expected. Now, is Whit going to help him with Kylie? As usual, character development has arrived. Again, very good with details. I didn't notice Ur errors. Must not have been too bad. Like Jim's wife wanting the divorce, convenient circumstance. Kylie wants to fuck with Trent Rick has asked him to take of the family needs while he's gone,; how coincidentally convenient. Love Ur twists. Works for me.!! Can't say much else. |
| 2019-05-04 20:06:47 | The Imperfect Storm Chapter 4 | There U go again, a convenient coincident, Whit Says "Stay with Ur sister" & Rick says. "look after my wife & child while I'm away." his involvement with Taylor also helps explain her attitude in the previous chapters. That doesn't puzzle me now & better explains the hots she developed for Trent after reading the Sis/Bro incest hot relationship on "Sex Stories" As I said earlier, " Ur material has therapeutic qualities." It shows an individual what could be if only they would cast away or overcome all their hangups with traditional social sexual ideas & restrictions. Most of us hesitate acting on fantasy because of the possibility of rejection, stigma, or "trouble" in other ways (hurtful & painful). Good work, better building character as U go; good detail, excellent plot. Look forward to Ch 5 (as U suggested). I would do it without Ur suggestion. Excited..!! |
| 2019-05-04 21:52:24 | The Imperfect Storm Chapter 5 | Glad I could vote. This time of day, I usually get "Too many votes today" or "502 Bad Gateway" that lasts an hour to half hour ? Guess the website is updating, deleting, etc. Depending on the reader's time zone one hour is as good as any other hour. The way U integrated the GF/Sis compatibility was classic smooth. As far as constructive critics, hard to suggest any. .All I can do is comment on the story as a whole compared to Ur other stories or other author's works. I haven't noticed any "stand out issues" that I could suggest improvement. Like Trucker 1269 said, "They should just all move in together. Perhaps Stacy or Missy get a boyfriend (superior quality of course) to help Trent out. 4 over-sexed women might tend to get jealous as to who gets the most, or best, or leftovers(too little cum), beside the fact of wearing him out & dropping his sperm count in case "someone" wants to complete the sex purpose "(child). All I can do is repeat myself, awesome. |
| 2019-05-04 23:45:24 | The Imperfect Storm Chapter 6 | It is moving on as expected. So far the only hangup I see is, Will Dickhead, AKA Richard, change his mind about moving in with Taylor. Will Taylor get the hots for Trent (working together) and want a threesome with Trent & Dick? There doesn't seem to be any technical issues (spelling, grammar, tense, etc.) Plot flows evenly, characters clear. I didn't care much for the "movie" Too many people, No character building, hero asshole, SMBD Club ???,just to name a few. I still know Ur style of twists & surprise, like "coincidental convenience". Excited to see how u twist this into a acceptable ending in 2 more chapters (unless they are long). |
| 2019-05-04 23:51:48 | The Imperfect Storm Chapter 6 | To "The Sexy Wife", U sound as hot as the girls on the page (compliment intended) |