| 2010-04-28 20:20:54 |
Seduced In The Rain
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now I have been able to add it to my favourites - don't know why that didn't work before! thanks again for a lovely story. |
| 2010-07-25 22:24:30 |
Bar Night Fun_(0)
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I really enjoyed this, and have added it to my 'favourites' list - a good story, vivid and realistic, and nicely written. There is just one thing that would improve it, which is to break it up into several shorter paragraphs - that will work better than one big block of text, which tends to put readers off. Thanks, honey, and look forward to reading some more of your stories. |
| 2010-07-28 19:40:09 |
WHAT I DID ON MY HOLIDAYS
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Well, we have just come back from another lovely holiday at the villa, and the croquet set was still there! We had a lot of fun with it - the best was when I hammered the scoring peg into the soft lawn, leaving about six inches of it sticking up at an angle of 60 degrees. I undid Claire's skimpy tie-string bikini panties and squatted her down so that the peg penetrated her asshole, and then I pushed her still further down untill her butt was right on the ground (she likes anal sometimes, and this really made her moan and gasp). Then I staked her arms and legs widespread in an X with the croquet hoops, stripped off my own bikini and spent some time kissing her tits and stomach, before making my way down to her pussy, which was wet and gaping open. Then I lowered myself on top of her, pushing my cunt onto her face, for an amazing 69 session that just blew our minds, we both came so many times! You can bet we are booking our July holiday for the same villa again next year, oh yes!! |
| 2010-08-14 22:23:19 |
She caught me looking
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I really enjoyed this - it got me all hot and wet, and that's what counts after all! I liked your description of the sex scene very much, especially the domination aspect and how Roxy makes her say her name. However, a bit more context would add to it - how does this start? where is it - is Roxy just coming out of the bathroom after a shower, hence the towel? Also perhaps more description of the characters. There are some bits in the opening paragraph that are confusing and not really convincing - if Roxy is her room-mate, why is there "my room" and "her room"? Anyway, thanks and I'm adding this to my favourites and looking forward to Part 2. |
| 2010-08-14 22:40:32 |
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This is really good - most of all the first part with the pick-up in the store, and all the comments about the sulky daughter, so very realistic and amusing too. It loses that a bit as it goes on, and there's a slight feeling that you are trying to get every thing in - every kind of sex, I mean, and maybe pacing it out more would work better, but a lot of it is good and hot, and certainly worked for me! |