| 2010-08-14 23:05:51 |
Very Hard Nipples_(0)
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Really good story, got me going - I love fantasies about lesbian sex at the office, especially like this, the boss and her PA (wish it happened like that in real life!). Nicely written, but breaking up the big block of text into shorter paragraphs would really make it a lot easier to read on a PC screen where the font size of the text is quite small. Anyway, nice one honey, and more like this please! |
| 2010-08-18 20:05:04 |
Wendy and Miss West
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Very sexy, very hot ... I've added this to my favourites list, and I'm looking forward to reading the other chapters - but first I'm going to reread the part where Wendy gets tied up and taken, but this time with my panties off and vibrator in, so I can really get in the mood!! |
| 2010-11-27 19:30:08 |
The Ordinary Housewife
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I really, really liked this story, and I have added it to my favourites. The scenario is convincing, and you set the scene well. Most of all, the emotions of the narrator, as well as the actual sex, are beautifully described. There are some especially good phrases, and you definitely have a talent for this! Please write some more lesbian stories - I don't care if they are written by men or women; if they're good (like this), then they're good and that's all that matters. |
| 2011-02-19 21:57:19 |
Fallen Fruit – Jenna Gets Her Brat
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Really hot - I liked this a lot, and I'm adding it to my favourites so I can come back and read it again (and cum again, and again - this got my rocks to roll allright!). Its really well described, vivid and fast paced, and very convincing - five stars for sure! Thanks for the fun! |
| 2011-02-19 22:01:30 |
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NEAT STUFF!! Short, but sweet - the writing in the sex scene is really good, some nice touches there. I'm adding this to my favourites (where you'll find other really hot lesbian stories, folks, come and see, see and cum!). |