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Comments from lesley_tara
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2011-06-21 21:09:07 | Moonlight | This is lovely, really lovely - so vivid, and full of real emotion. It deserves a much higher rating than this. |
| 2011-07-04 18:49:32 | SCENE IN A NIGHT CLUB | I'm really sorry, I made a mistake when putting the tags on this story, and got muddled with another story that I was posting at the same time (Office Surprise). This story should NOT have the tags for Blackmail, Job/Place of Work and Threesome, and probably not for Domination/Submission either. If those tags have brought you to it by mistake, I can only apologise, and I will try to get them changed. I'm really cross with myself about this!! |
| 2011-07-05 20:58:33 | A lot of scene-setting and back story, which I like as it makes the story seem real and the characters like actual people. This was a really nice romantic one, though maybe it would be more convincing if it took Jill a little longer to warm to the idea of lesbian sex and fall in love with her rescuer? I liked that you followed through afterwards, and rounded it off with what happened to them. Thanks for a nice read. | |
| 2011-07-05 21:16:23 | Bar Snack | Wow - this is just wonderful! I don't know how I didn't find it before, but I'm so glad that I have now. Your writing is great - not a word wasted, and yet a great sense of both the setting and the action. Most of all, I just loved the way you gave the narrator's real thoughts in italics, after her actual remarks - so real, and some of them made me laugh out loud. This is a definite addition to my favourites list. |
| 2011-08-07 22:57:40 | Hole In The Wall_(0) | Lovely story, your writing style is really good and clear, so I can really imagine the scene - not just the two girls together, but the narrator too (she's hot stuff!!). Maybe it would help at the outset to explain a bit more about the hole in the wall, because that needs a bit of jump in credulity ... is this between two apartments in the same block, or two houses? Apart from that, great story, and I'm adding it to the other hot lez stories in my favourites list (highly recommended, you should try them!), and I'm hoping there will be a Part 2 to this? Thanks - you got this lady hot to trot, for sure! |