| 2012-04-17 20:45:31 |
Peeping Tom Girl_(1)
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I liked this one - it passed the crucial test of making me slip my panties aside and slide a couple of fingers in for "a quick one"! Nice setting, and the description of the two girls being watched was hot - with the added bonus of the voyeur getting herself off too. Although it's only a minor point, the story would work even better if you give it a proof-read before posting (the spell checker will pick up some things, but not all) - I'm not saying this to be pedantic, but because it makes it less easy and smooth a read. Anyway, I'm adding this to my favourites list - the home where all the good lesbo stories go! |
| 2012-04-20 22:10:37 |
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Although I must admit pregnancy is not exactly my kind of thing (for rather obvious reasons - LOL), but the story held my interest due to the characters and descriptions, and it is well and clearly written, so thumbs up! |
| 2012-05-14 21:15:08 |
After School Fuck with Teen Lesbian Sluts
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I really liked the immediacy of the story - the fast pace carries you along, and it builds up well. I don't know how I missed it amongst your other stories, but I'm glad that I found it now (thanks to it being on Debbie XXX's favourites list), and I have added it to mine. You have left some real opportunities for the story to branch out - the librarian, the other schoolgirl, and perhaps most of all her mother's best friend ... hope you follow these up!! love, Lesley |
| 2012-05-29 21:05:53 |
Mistress Carrie
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Oh, I liked this, VERY, VERY MUCH!! You really got this lesbian wet and gasping! The scenario is really hot and well imagined, but perhaps there could be a bit more description, especially in the final part, which went by too quickly for my taste. I'm adding this to my favourites, and PLEASE CONTINUE the story. When you do, it helps the reader if you put a blank line in between paragraphs. |
| 2012-06-09 20:30:36 |
What Mary gets up to...... part 1
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Very nice - clear and well-described, and believeable. You set the scene well, and I could really see it in my imagination. Definitely one to add to my favourites list! Thanks, Lesley. |