| 2011-08-07 23:03:54 |
Sun, Sea and Sex
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Followed your author link from the "Hole in the wall" story and found this - X marks the hot treasure on the beach! Loved this one too, you really can write a hot g/g scene, so don't stop ... more, more, more! |
| 2011-12-22 17:46:48 |
Her First Time_(4)
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Hot stuff, with the action very well described - I really enjoyed reading this, and imagining the scene. Thank you, and I hope there are more chapters to follow! |
| 2012-01-25 20:21:48 |
the office_(1)
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I liked this a lot, both the settings and your descriptions, which build things up slowly and believably. The best part of the story is the scene at the massage parlour, because the narrator's doubts about whether the girl is coming on to her are so realistic, and you keep that tension going really well. The first scene with Jane is good too, but the last section with all the girls does not quite ring true. Also, by that stage there is some repitition in how the describe the sex. But these are minor points, in sexy story that got my fingers in my pussy, for sure! and I'm adding this one to my favourites list too! |
| 2012-01-25 20:38:16 |
The conference_(1)
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So GOOD!! This is even better than your other story (The Office), which I read first and followed the link to this. I really like a story that you can believe could easily really happen, and which - like this one - is described in rich detail, both the actions and (even more important) the emotions, so you can really visualise it as you read it. Please write more all-girl lesbian only stories like this - you are really good and have definite talent. For my choice, leave out the guys, because too many "lesbian" stories on the site bring them in, and there are not enough girls-only stories (well, there are NEVER enough girls-only stories!!!). Thanks, babe, for a real turn-on. |
| 2012-01-27 21:45:57 |
Paint it Summer
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By the end this story was really HOT - the scene on the ladder with the narrator looking in at the bedroom, such a simple idea (like the best ones always are) but so well done! In the middle, it is very sudden when you introduce Summer, and that was a bit confusing, took a while to realise who was who - maybe a bit more scene-setting there would help the read, but as a whole it's a great story, and for such I'm adding it to my favourites list (where all the best lezzie-only stories on this site are to be found, check it out babes!!) Thanks and kisses, Lesley |