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Comments from archrevenant
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2009-05-03 00:55:19 | Sibling Discoveries | ""The eleven year old is too immature. My son is eleven and he is already jerking off in his room" Wow, you're a fucked up person who I hope is full of shit because if you're telling the truth than I feel truly sorry for your son. Kiddy rapists and pedos deserve death, I'd pull the trigger my self as I have no sympathy for you sick fucks."- OMG, what is wrong with this guy? Just because he knows his son masturbates, doesn't make him a paedophile!!! Honestly, read the tags people, if you're homophobic, dont read gay stories. And its a work of fiction, there's nothing wrong with fantasizing about young kids having sex. I just hope none of you actually force yourself on a kid who doesnt want it. |
| 2009-05-04 23:55:47 | Weekend with steve | I found it distracting that you said you were all 9 years old, then you said you were teenagers. And you didnt use any punctuation and the sentence about it being 12 " from your face was confusing. I didnt like the pace and your sentence structure made it hard for me to keep reading. Sorry. |
| 2009-05-05 00:19:36 | In the sand box | It was as if you wrote it all at once while you were jacking off. You should write your stories over a series of days, or even weeks for some. That way you can edit them and make them more detailed. Your spelling does need attention and i would suggest writing it on Word then copying and pasting it on here. |
| 2009-05-05 00:32:10 | In the Sandbox - Part II | Your punctuation and spelling is terrible and makes it very hard to keep reading. I think your opinion that people will get bored if it's too long is quite silly. Your stories are too short and that makes them boring. Especially since nothing ever happens. |
| 2009-05-05 00:32:19 | In the sand box | It was as if you wrote it all at once while you were jacking off. You should write your stories over a series of days, or even weeks for some. That way you can edit them and make them more detailed. Your spelling does need attention and i would suggest writing it on Word then copying and pasting it on here. |