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Comments from Kenny1kenny
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| 2011-11-09 02:00:31 | I love your writing style. You know that it isn't always necessary to delve into detail with an event for it to be great. Just like the ritual. The reader knows that it is an awesome event. It becomes more so by the fact you don't describe it. The deal about Assassin's Creed, well, you said you wrote your own stuff. The quality of your writing skills makes me believe you. I never read that other story anyway, so I could give a shit. I don't know why you keep apologizing for your grammar mistakes. It would take an English professor to find them. Not many of the dumb bastards that attack author's writings here know any of those. Keep up the good work and I'll keep reading your stuff. I wish I could write as well as you do. You are an awesome author. |
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| 2011-11-09 04:00:53 | Incest Is Best | To not my cup of tea. What the fuck are you looking for? |
| 2011-11-09 23:38:11 | Wonderful. I liked the way you made the story rough as a rape then turned it into a romantic love story in the end. Bravo on a job well done. | |
| 2011-11-09 23:55:19 | When is I Couldn't Think Of a Title Part Two coming out. Or maybe you could call it Just Another Nother Sex Story. I know its hard to follow up on a good thing. It would be difficult to make the sequel as interesting as the original, but I know you are up to it. Sorry, I haven't read Just Another Sex Story yet, but I did glance in long enough to find it is a revision of the earlier story. What little I did read appears to be more concise, making it a smoother read. I will read it soon. Thanks for posting this great story. |
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| 2011-11-10 03:28:13 | I liked the re-write better than the original, which I assume was the reason you did it to start with. The detail you added made it all the more exciting. I didn't understand why someone said the sex could have been more elaborate. You described the sex scenes vividly and erotically without making it so long that the reader would tire of it. Again, your writing style is superb. Nothing like mine. Which is something you should be happy about. |