| 2011-11-25 23:27:45 |
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Alas, I am confused. I thought you were feeling cruel yet you wrote this sweet story where the guy is going to give her some of her own medicine. Perhaps you were intending on being cruel by discontinuing the series. Yes that must be it. Great story as usual. |
| 2011-11-27 03:33:48 |
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Don't get me wrong. I love all of your stories. Even the were this stories I mentioned before. But it seems so strange. The stories I like the best seem to be rated much lower than the ones that I liked less. Maybe I just don't have the same tastes the majority of folks on the site seem to have.
This one really impressed me. I loved the way you had Roan and Cyl play the cat and mouse game taking advantage of each others mistakes. That was so cool. The sex scene was very well done also. Very exciting without being vulgar. I am going to read part 2 soon.
Keep rocking with the great stuff. You make me envious with your writing skills. I wish I could write half as good. My ratings suck compared to yours. |
| 2011-11-28 00:17:19 |
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Your writing just keeps getting better and better. Where do you get all these wonderful characters? The story line is fascinating. Keep grinding them out girl. |
| 2011-11-29 00:04:19 |
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Absolutely amazing story. The sex was fantastic. Every detail of the plot had me yearning for the next. You have a way with words that is unrivaled. Keep up the good work. |
| 2011-11-29 12:24:44 |
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That was cool. The way you hinted that there were others staying in the dorm room without actually mentioning it. The fact they could have been caught at any moment and yet Roscrow was seemingly in no hurry. In the end, they were only moments away from being caught. Yes, you are an absolutely fantastic writer. I wish I had a quarter of the talent and imagination you have. I get jealous of your seemingly endless ideas and your special way of making words sing. Keep it up. |