| 2011-11-10 13:28:40 |
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Great story. I'm not into werewolf stuff, but you made it interesting enough to give it a go. Yeah, its definitely a rough draft. I can only imagine what it will be like when you fine tune it someday. Well, on to Part Two. Tomorrow that is. |
| 2011-11-10 23:13:00 |
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Superb story. Keep up the good work. Another thing I like about the way you write is you are quite literate. There are very few spelling mistakes. The ones that are there are still readible. Not that all that matters, but it is nice to read someone's stuff when it is obvious they have some education. |
| 2011-11-10 23:16:12 |
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See what I mean. Readible, readable. What does it matter. Well, actually there are a lot more mistakes in my stories than in yours. I guess I just don't have the patience you have. |
| 2011-11-13 00:07:55 |
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Nice story. Great build up of characters. I was going to inquire about Lisa and Kate, but read the comments first, so there is no need. You definitely have a flair with words. Keep up the good work. |
| 2011-11-14 00:46:31 |
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Just wanted to let you know that last comment was mine. The damn thing logged me out right in the middle of writing it. I've always hated the anonymous writer. Especially the ones that want to bash you and then don't have the balls to admit it. Congrats on the 100% rating. I've never made better than 8 votes fefore they bashed me. Keep up the great work. |