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Comments from ssalo
| Date | Story title | Comment |
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| 2011-03-12 00:32:43 | I especially like the last third of this poem. "And tells me.......That feelings shouldn't be felt." Perfect in my head where practice has perfected the art of denial. Thank you. |
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| 2011-03-12 05:06:51 | Last Chance....Chapter 4 | Thank you all, the comments are way more important to me than the votes. Unfortunately, without the positive votes there will be no comments. I'm not a big fan of the voting system. |
| 2011-03-12 17:40:34 | Swapping Girlfriends | Exellent ending? I pretty much like all of your stories but I'm hoping Willie the dog has more to tell us. |
| 2011-03-15 00:52:35 | This might be your best yet. I love both halves and how they balance each other perfectly as they pivot around the present, just a small mark where we spend our whole lives, between our painful pasts and our foreboding futures. | |
| 2011-03-15 15:18:47 | I like a lot of loving father daughter incest FANTASY stories but this might be the first one that I could like when I considered it as a possible reality. His shock, pain meds w/wine & love for his dead wife, her age, and her resemblance of her mom resulting in his confusion of the two of them make his POV okay in my mind. Her shock, love for her father and only parent, understanding of his pain over his long dead wife, the wine, and his expression of his love for them both through talking about losing her mom while gaining her together with saying how they resembled each other make her POV okay as reality in my mind. On the other hand, although I am not able to write a sex scene, I still have to agree with Goodfather, you are weak in that respect too. More expression of tenderness and less trying to use unusual terms would have helped there. Without the weak sex scene, your story would have made my contest vote decision one story harder to make. Amazing story. |