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Comments from ssalo
| Date | Story title | Comment |
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| 2011-03-15 15:19:37 | I like a lot of loving father daughter incest FANTASY stories but this might be the first one that I could like when I considered it as a possible reality. His shock, pain meds w/wine & love for his dead wife, her age, and her resemblance of her mom resulting in his confusion of the two of them make his POV okay in my mind. Her shock, love for her father and only parent, understanding of his pain over his long dead wife, the wine, and his expression of his love for them both through talking about losing her mom while gaining her together with saying how they resembled each other make her POV okay as reality in my mind. On the other hand, although I am not able to write a sex scene, I still have to agree with Goodfather, you are weak in that respect too. More expression of tenderness and less trying to use unusual terms would have helped there. Without the weak sex scene, your story would have made my contest vote decision one story harder to make. Amazing story. |
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| 2011-03-15 15:23:00 | My apologizes for voting positive when I was timed out. I forgot to check. | |
| 2011-03-16 07:28:52 | Cybergasm. | I like this story as a prelude or first chapter, it's the beginning of an old story well told, if you decide to or have continued it, it's open to a wide range of interesting possibilities. If this is it, it's still well written but I hate being teased. I might be biased being a lifelong SF fan. |
| 2011-03-17 01:48:54 | Last Will and Testament | Really, really good. I'm not surprised. Thank you WSF. |
| 2011-03-17 23:29:58 | My Wife wants to Cheat | Perfect ending, I loved it. |