| 2021-06-16 01:59:57 |
Hyperspermia Daddy Chapter 01
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Looking forward to part two. |
| 2021-06-18 21:24:51 |
Oedipus Milf Club Chapter 01 - Sandy’s Awakening
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Good story and looking forward to additional chapters, but... is Eric 20 (early in the story) or 18? |
| 2021-08-20 22:05:22 |
STEP SISTER’S DILEMMA
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Is the unknown dude unknown or… his best friend? What is a step-step-sister? You introduce Arielle Wilder once, you don’t need to use her full name over and over. The story premise is great, you need to work on the telling and making sure details are consistent. |
| 2021-08-21 15:09:26 |
Chloe 4 - Further Adventures, The Audition
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Loving this series, but… Suzy became Lucy once. Watch the little details. |
| 2021-08-21 18:05:37 |
Legally Binding, Ch. 1
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I look forward to the next chapter of Nadine’s journey. |