| 2011-05-08 23:36:30 |
I Discover Jenna's Secret
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Not my usual, but bloody well written and I could see/feel the attraction |
| 2011-05-09 20:44:09 |
My Lovely twin.
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dav, I'll have to disagree with Happy Rabbit and say this was not a GREAT story BUT admit it was really good. Some really inventive imagination and a couple of interesting twists, but I felt it didn't flow very well. I'd be prepared to believe you are a bit uncomfortable with the English language. Having said that I enjoyed reading it, and will probably read it again. I've given it a + vote and a personal score of 7/10 and I've already got you listed as an author to keep an eye on. You show promise. |
| 2011-05-09 20:57:08 |
Little Horny?
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Watch your tags - this is not a joke of any sort. Written by somebody with no idea of morals, probably under aged and to whom English was their least favorite subject in school. A writer first reads at least hundreds of stories so they get an idea of how stories should be written. Poor attempt. 5/10 for trying. |
| 2011-05-09 21:58:32 |
My Girlfriend and My Sister...both want me!
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Geez, MR.Kool, This has GOT to be one of your best - and your worst is pretty good. There HAS to be a follow up to this. Get a bigger place and a HUGE bed and keep them both satisfied. They are obviously sexually compatible and in the long term Sis could provide a baby or babies and the kids could grow up with two mothers. 9/10 and + vote. ***** |
| 2011-05-09 23:42:58 |
Study Time
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I wonder why someone with an obvious talent for writing, would want to write, even fictitiously, about a subject that degrades women and contains violence and non-consensual acts. Make no mistake you are potentially a great writer, just the subject matter offends me. |