| 2011-05-12 22:54:21 |
Worshippind Miki Part Two
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Very enjoyable and extremely well written sequel, beautifully laid out and an easy pleasure to read. If any more detail was included it would be too much, so keep an eye on that, but this level made a superb story. + vote and personal rating 9.5/10 Thank you for writing it. |
| 2011-05-13 02:04:14 |
13 year old virgin
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Thought this was going to be just another "Let's fuck a 13 yr old and ditch her" saga. But, I got it wrong, and I'm glad I read on. Really enjoyable story, well written and spaced AND written in REAL English, not bloody txt speak or pidgeon English. 8.5 out of 10 and obviously positive vote. Thank you and well done. |
| 2011-05-13 02:44:33 |
I Want To Make Love Too
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Anonymous 14.51.44 is a wanker - Disregard. Absolutely lovely sexy romantic story, well written and spaced. Easy to read (and NO rape, NO violence and NO 5-6 year olds) and just plain good erotica. Thank you for writing and sharing this excellent effort. + vote and personal grading 8.5/10 |
| 2011-05-13 04:47:45 |
Maternal Desire
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No need for pregnancy. Only fuckheads think every son should get his mother pregnant, probably because they are the result of a defective birth through incest?? Great story which could be continued, just not with him getting mommy "up the duff". But then, You're a shotgun and he's already given her both barrels. As a stand alone, this is still very good. +vote and 8/10 |
| 2011-05-13 14:25:11 |
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Congratulations. You've sent a record for literary incompetence. Nearly every third word spelled wrong, shocking grammar, childishly written and whoops something good - very well spaced. Obviously written by a dyslexic 10 yr old or another failure of the Australian educational system. Don't try to write stories when you come home from the pub drunk. 2/10 |