| 2011-05-12 02:32:06 |
It's Not A Handicap part 1
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While I totally abhor the subject of rape and think rapists are sick bastards, I have got to say that your writing style is pretty good and technically enjoyable. |
| 2011-05-12 02:56:28 |
Kat and Old Man
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Really good and imaginative story written beautifully. Loved it. |
| 2011-05-12 03:29:27 |
My Lovely twin Part 2
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Hey dav, wassup. . .First you send me am IM saying ta for criticism and them carry on. You use a big word like tumescent correctly - yet don't know the difference between waist and waste or just don't care enough to get it right. Good story spoiled by crap layout and shit spelling isn't a good review.. . .Buck up. I KNOW your better than that. |
| 2011-05-12 03:30:18 |
My Lovely twin Part 2
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Hey dav, wassup. . .First you send me am IM saying ta for criticism and them carry on. You use a big word like tumescent correctly - yet don't know the difference between waist and waste or just don't care enough to get it right. Good story spoiled by crap layout and shit spelling isn't a good review.. . .Buck up. I KNOW you're better than that. |
| 2011-05-12 21:17:33 |
Fucking Dads New Girlfriend
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Blue, You seem to make a habit of exploring different styles rather than stick to a particular genre, and this one is a beauty. Inventive, well written and spaced and really easy to read. Congratulations on an excellent story. Obviously + vote and my personal rating 9.5/10 |